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Dolly's Temptress

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"Dolly's Temptress"


Written by:

Sara Hervey

(aka: IzzyMarrie , also known as 'The Major')

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Help.




Where oh where is Sally?    
          
Help!

        Sally who?     
                             
The girl who sits,                         

    with dolly black,
                           
        who sits upon a wooden desk!        
I'm trapped here!

I'M ALIVE!!!


Sally dear, Sally who?  
          
         A little girl?             
                     
Why, yes, the girl who stares!          
   
HELP ME PLEASE!!!!!!

    She stares,                                   
        from eyes of glass,                       
      
            he stares right back,                      
                all upon a wooden desk!                 


Why oh fates does she stare,

    at dolly black,     

        and he stare right back?        


Oh but he smiles yet!

    But smiled none,

        as she danced,
            on broken glass,

                for dolls can't dance,
                    upon a wooden desk!    


So Sally, dear Sally tempts him?
Yes, yes!

    "He whispers lies",
        she had cried,
            "Go away!"

                He replied,
                    with a laugh

                        ". . ."                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ". . ."
                      Tap, Tap                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Tap, Tap... 

Dolly, is that you?





She hates oh loves

    her dolly black,

        her dolly black who hates,
            who loves her back.         

But why does he hate her back?
Does she love him yet?    
  
Oh dolly temptress,            
he lies, he LIES!                    

I'm scared...where did you go?
   
But yet, the girl replies,

    "I only want to be with dolly Black.."

        with her silly, stupid  

                                   l i e s




T i c k  t o c k
t h e  c l o c k      h a d       s t o p p e d,


    it struck..            


            IT'S TIME, IT'S TIME!


Dolly, oh dolly,                

 

            no  longer  on  a  wooden  desk?


The girl spoke none,                 

         

w h e r e  o h  w h e r e  h a d  h e r  m i n d  g o n e ?


                    Where oh where is Sally!

upon the floor,                        
  
the wretched girl...                            
      
is dead,                                
          
DEAD, DEAD!
                                    


           
    I smile down at her,


Silly girl,        
  

        and walk away.


            She will always be            
           

                with dolly.       




                                I laugh,
I laugh,                                 

                                            I laugh,

I laugh.                                            
Why don't you help me!?

      
I, the devil, laugh within her skin.
I'm Sally!

I, the devil, laugh within her skin.
I only look like a doll....



Weren't we going to be together forever?
This is a poem that I drafted 3 weeks ago, then suddenly, I became inspired to finish it.  I spent over an hour figuring out how I wanted to format this, and I have to say, I'm quite pleased with how this turned out!

Who is dolly's temptress?  Well, this entire idea came from a flashfiction me and my boyfriend were going to write, and may still write in the future.  The basic idea centers around a beautiful boy doll possessed by an evil spirit, who tricks and corrupts a young woman into becoming solely dependent on him alone.  Then, when the time comes, 'Dolly Black' switches places with the woman and takes her skin, while she suffers in isolation within the confines of the doll.

Like how I wrote this?  Please fave, or at least leave a comment!  (also, try highlighting the top of the page, all the way to the bottom for a secret message)
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UberChimerism's avatar
Makes me think of Robert the Doll ^^